". . . I know, it's early," continued Hal; he flipped out his trousers legs and pulled them up, fetching a hand towel not quite dry from the humid night air. The old tar soap and the not-new toothbrush were in his hand when he finished his thought, "and I know it might not come to a job today, but it's a chance, a strong chance. Mr. Finkelstein said they're hiring as many as fifty men. And Mr. Finkelstein's not wrong on this . . . if we're quick and early and get our names in." Hal pushed into his work boots and, at the door, reminded Herbie, "Keep moving along."
N. Finkelstein, the dispatcher on Spruce Street who kept account of outgoing Staats Zeitung editions from the presses to the loading dock, was a cranky man who had been ancient when Hal, at fourteen, had worked for him in Hal's first summer in
Manhattan; and ever since those torrid months, Finkelstein had been Hal's most reliable source of information. When Finkelstein, who could tell astonishing, frightening, supernatural tales of his youth in East Prussia, said something was about to happen in a commercial way, it did: Finkelstein was Hal's equal to a portent certain, and the night before, as Hal and Herbie had taken the shortcut across City Hall Park and passed Finkelstein's tiny alcove of a dukedom on Spruce Street, Finkelstein had hailed Hal with the tip of an advertisement scheduled to run in this Sunday's automobile sections of the city papers inviting applicants to one of the swiftest-growing automobile enterprises, a Willys-Overland dealership uptown on Automobile Row.
Hal's
stepbrother Herbie did not answer as he, already washed and dressed--Herbie had been up for a half hour before Hal opened
his eyes--was busy arranging the
bedcovers for a third time, smoothing, tucking, tightening, and then he began
again on the corners.
". . . and we'll find the money, you can count on it," Hal continued, returned
from the landing toilet and washroom, "and if we can get these jobs, and we're
more than qualified, we will have the money by next Christmas." Hal spoke
resolutely, not as if he were proposing a case, rather as if all was
determined. Herbie did not resist Hal's decisions.
Herbie
was satisfied with the bedcovers, the nightstand, the two-drawer bureau with
their clothes; and he was now lacing his boots precisely to make the ends
symmetrical the way he liked them.
Hal
finished his best blue knit tie, loaded his pockets with one quarter, six
pennies, and his billfold with five single dollars in it--four for the rent and one for the weekend's meals--and led Herbie down the stairs onto the narrow
sidewalk of Pearl Street, where the vibrating sounds from the El tracks above
momentarily overwhelmed any conversation. In the fresh first light from
the east over the tenements, Hal saw the sharp shadows of the heavy cars
approach from the south like a flight of swooping birds of prey, and then the
train was overhead and on top of them as the brakes screamed, and the train
halted at its Fulton Street station. The brothers turned the corner onto Fulton
and, as the train moved on to the north, Hal could speak without shouting,
"We've got time, we'll hoof it up Broadway and save the fare."
Herbie
said, "Yeah, good, Hal."
"We'll
get you breakfast at Herald Square."
At
Broadway, with the sunrise horse-drawn traffic growing quickly as the lumbering
teams made the turn pulling tarp-covered loads onto Fulton toward the ferry,
Hal paused while a half-full electric trolley passed them slowly moving
north. No, he thought. Also,
there was the stairwell down to the subway. Save two fares, he thought. That's ten cents we
don't have to earn again.
Hal
faced Herbie. Their daily commute was a comfortable round-trip walk to
the National Biscuit Company garage at Fifteenth Street and Tenth Avenue.
It would be a hot walk to Automobile Row. Hal didn't want them to present
themselves caked with salty sweaty; it wouldn't look promising if they couldn't
spare the carfare. He took off his coat and hooked it over his left
arm. Herbie imitated him. Hal took off his forage cap.
Herbie imitated him, and he also pushed his wavy brown hair back from his ears
and off his thick brow.
"We
look like reliable men. Sober, experienced and married. Right?"
"Good, Hal."
"We must say we are
married men, you will remember?"
"Yeah."
"The
advertisement is only for married men. If they ask for your wife's name,
say 'Annie.' You say 'Annie,' and I'll say 'Annie,' if they ask me, too.
Don't say 'Mrs. Hoffman.' They don't care. It's just part of
the advertisement. Annie said we can use her name. She understands
why we are doing it, and she says that she never had two such suitors in her
time, and is sure we have wives named 'Annie' waiting for us in the
future. Now. Who is my wife?" Hal questioned.
"Annie,"
Herbie answered immediately with an uncontrolled grin.
Mrs.
Anna "Annie" Hoffman owned Hoffman's Restaurant on Pearl Street where Hal and
Herbie took their evening meals. Widowed, prominent in the neighborhood,
good to Herbie, Annie had through the years in New York come to serve as their
in-town mom; she was the younger sister of one of their mother's friends,
another house matron, in Ossining.
"Who
is your wife?"
Herbie
answered cautiously, "Annie?"
"Right."
Herbie
did not show a concern for the deception; instead, Herbie was planning for the
moment: he was eyeing the restaurant already warmly lit for arriving customers
on the other side of Broadway.
Hal distracted Herbie from his hunger; "There're egg sandwiches for a good price, uptown."
Fit, conscientious, amiable; presentably dressed in their brushed working man's worsted wool, pinch-back brown suits, the two brothers--one a six-foot-tall, long-nosed, dark-lanky-haired, gracile twenty-two-year-old; the other a five-and-a- half-foot, squat, chestnut-haired, meaty-shouldered, full-moon-round-faced, lumbering and awkward nearly nineteen-year-old--followed the trolley tracks up Broadway past the façade of St. Paul's Church, past the looming monolith of the Woolworth Building and the chipped sandcastle of the Post Office and the leafy elms of City Hall Park, the frantic pedestrian flow on Newspaper Row--the carts were lined up like farm hands in front of the Trib, Sun and World buildings--and, crossing Chambers, they plunged into the rising canyon toward Union Square. They saw the morning city population moving customarily to and from the trolleys, the storefronts and vending corners, the El and the underground stations, preparing for the pedestrian rush in the next hours. They passed heaped rag carts and black-bearded ragmen, tiny newsboys and newsgirls crowding around the drop-offs, misshapen fellows with watering cans, bowler-wearing bootblacks, ash carts and their keepers, one-man street sweepers; the first deployment of peddlers of suspenders, of sponges, of shoe strings; pretzel vendors pushing brightly painted carts, a man with a grindstone on a small wagon, larger grindstones at work on the back of carts, an organ grinder moving to his corner in haste, two burly policemen, and the occasional young woman on her way home in last night's frock. Passing Union Square's wide-open gardens dotted with hansom cabs seeking fares, and more peddlers dispersing up from the Ghetto, the brothers followed Broadway's thirty-degree turn to the west toward Midtown. The buildings grew newer, with bright, striped awnings lowered for the rising sun. By the time they reached the open spaces of Madison Square, where there were hansom cabs as well as double-decker autobuses at the curbs, they were both sweaty and thirsty, so Hal bought them two scoops of water from a clean-looking vendor; and when they reached Herald Square they were both beyond peckish. The gathering clerks for Gimbel's, Macy's and Saks were parading with sweet buns or fruit. Hal didn't want to linger; at a stand across from the Herald, where Hal and Herbie had worked as loaders one summer, he bought Herbie a runny egg sandwich the way he liked it, licking his fingers and using his kerchief as a tablecloth, and he got a hot buttered roll for himself. They ate while pushing hard through a crowd gawking at a horse-drawn collision with an overloaded truck before the Opera House and then moved single-file into the dense pedestrian streams through the Forties as the early commuter cars delivered skimmer-hatted clerks and broad-brimmed straw hat-wearing, dour, white-bloused women in bountiful ankle-length black skirts. North of the theatrical billboards for unsavory new plays and violent motion pictures, the horse-drawn traffic was overrun by the autotrucks and automobiles, which forced Hal and Herbie to leave the trolley tracks and pace along the curb. The prominent Midtown hotels and clubs on Fifth Avenue wouldn't brighten with patrons for another two hours; already the disciplined battalions of servants and vendors were rushing to prepare for another steamy, thrifty Friday in early summer, June 23, 1916.
Hal
was relieved that the employee entrance was still locked at the prominent
façade of the C. T. Silver Motor Company at the nine-storey 1760 Broadway
building, beside the Broadway Tabernacle Church at Fifty-sixth Street. By
the clock on Broadway--Hal did not own a
pocket watch--it was 6:20 A.M.
and the managers must still be en route.
"We're
on time," Hal told Herbie, "and doesn't this look promising?"
The
three show windows on Broadway were plush with gold-leafed signage, with
matching dark awnings, brass accessories; and the windows displayed the heart
of the marble-finished showroom with seven differently arranged, black,
polished, opened-up and shining new Willys-Overland Six touring vehicles,
five-seaters, with slip covers, shock absorbers, trunk racks, bumpers, tool
kits. Bunting for the approaching Fourth of July, and for the routine
National Guard parades on Broadway these days, festooned the benches, chairs
and tables surrounding the Overlands. Salesman's desks were arranged on
either side of the merchandise, like gun platforms, and in the rear there were
several black doors leading to the interior, probably to the garage.
Tidy and rich, Hal thought, but I
wonder where the new mechanics go?
Within
moments, a new Chalmers Roadster halted to let out a clean-shaven middle-aged
gentleman, gray temples under his skimmer; he slipped between Hal and Herbie
with an, "Excuse me, young gentlemen," and opened the employee door with a
bright key on a chain. He glanced around in puzzlement as Hal and Herbie
both removed their caps.
"Good
morning, sir, I am Hal Coolidge and this is my partner, Herbie Hecht, born in
Westchester, the both of us, and we are automobile mechanics and have come to
apply for two of the fifty new mechanic positions to be advertised in the
newspapers, offering a twenty-five per cent bonus to our weekly wages and a
week's vacation," Hal enunciated his words as he'd studied to do, crisply, no
drawling, few contractions. "We are experienced, sober, married young
men, with three years of work on all manner of internal combustion engines and
vehicles at several garages on the West Side. Willys-Overland certainly,
as well as Packards, Maxwells, Hupmobiles, Fords, Stevens-Duryea, Coles,
Pierce-Arrows, Wintons, Appersons, Studebakers--and Chalmers, too, and all
trucks in the city, Packards, Whites, Quads, Macks, Saurers, FWDs, Locomobiles,
Krebs. We've taken them apart and fixed them right up, brakes, steering,
axles, wheels. We have references and an address on Pearl Street, and
we're ready to work, whatever hours you need."
"Well,
now, well, now. Two of the fifty I need? Yes. Come in."
Two
other trim, younger men, without skimmers, arrived to follow them into the
showroom, and swiftly the newcomers attended to the morning chores: curtains
parted and tucked, awnings lowered, windows opened, front doors unlocked,
automobile doors opened, signs repositioned, one of which read, "The Handsomest
'Light Six' Offered for Sale."
".
. . and what's this about applying for a job I haven't advertised yet?" asked
the older man, who was now, as he stacked an ink pot beside the blotter on a
desk and brought out a nameplate, was revealed as the modest proprietor of an
immodest enterprise, Mr. C. T. Silver himself, smiling, curious. "How did
you hear about it? My shop men, my son?"
"We learned from a former employer of ours on Newspaper Row. Mr. Finkelstein of Spruce Street," answered Hal precisely. "And we came to put our names in as early as possible. We can start today. We have to give notice at out garage on Tenth, sir. We can be back here tomorrow morning."
"Finkelstein
of Spruce Street?" Silver laughed genuinely. "Don't recall seeing
him at the Times office." Silver took scratch paper from his desk and laid
out a sheet before Hal. He placed down an Eberhard Faber pencil.
"Put your names on this, and your addresses, for certain." Silver
hesitated at sharp sounds from the back of the building, the whoosh of an air
compressor. "Wait, my foreman's here."
A
long-armed, thick-black-haired young man in shirt and tie and clean gray
overalls walked through the inner black door. Silver
introduced Hal and Herbie as applicants. The foreman's name over his pocket and
pack of Helmar's was "Louis G. Duquet." "You're mechanics?" Hal explained
their experience quickly, leaving out most of the makes. "We sell Overlands,"
Duquet replied, not friendly.
Hal
answered, "Willys-Overlands are straightforward to maintain."
Silver
grunted. "I've been listening to complaints about them for seven years."
"I've
found when you show the owner the problem, " Hal returned, "and how simple it
is to fix, they cheer up and ask about other engines you can fix, and what
you'd recommend for their next purchase. I wouldn't hesitate to recommend
Overlands."
Silver
laughed. "That's natural salesmanship!"
Duquet
looked down at Herbie. "You're this mechanic, too, hey?"
Herbie
crushed his cap like a towel, head down, making his tiny sigh to Hal.
"What's
wrong with him?" Duquet asked Hal.
Silver
frowned but didn't intervene.
"Nothing
at all," said Hal. "How long you worked on automobile engines?"
"As
long as you, Hal."
"What's
that?" Duquet demanded of Herbie.
Herbie
repeated his words twice more in his wetly sibilant, poorly glottal
pronunciation; it came out sadly indistinct on the third attempt at "Athongath
ulemm, Howwl." Herbie wanted to try a fourth time; Hal shook him off.
Grunting,
wiping palms on his overall pocket flaps, Duquet turned his gaze to his boss,
but before he could comment, a young man in a trim blue suit, brilliant white
shirt, carrying a skimmer and a cup of coffee, approached the desk. "Good morning,
Father."
"David,
David, what are you doing in so early?"
"Dropped
by to get some cash from you, what else?"
Silver
laughed and laughed. "David, I want you to meet two clever fellows,
clever just like us." Silver addressed Hal, "This is my son, and he's off
to Mexico soon to whip those Mex', kee-rect?"
"Preee-pared,
Father!" was David Silver's jest. He was a jovial, not tall, round-faced,
well-barbered man a little older than Hal, pudgy and soft looking in his good
clothes, with a big-toothed smile and long-fingered hands. He put down his cup
and saucer on the desk. ". . . not so clever today, marching in this heat
wave, I'm afraid. The regiment's called on parade at three-thirty from
the Armory, to march down Fifth to Herald Square and then back to muster up
Park and Lex. Another recruiting drive. We're woefully short, four
hundred short at least, and we're not going to find more than a dozen before we
go."
"No?"
said his father. "When?"
"The
latest guess is next week, but it's a guess." David Silver shrugged
manfully and shook his head to convey discretion. "After the four miles
today, is sure."
His
father slapped his tabletop. "Are you ahorse, at least?"
"Afoot.
The colonels will ride in style, of course."
"One
of mine?"
"They're
mightily tempted in this scorcher."
C.
T. Silver produced a roaring, unself-conscious laugh. When he slapped his
tabletop with both hands this time, he looked to Hal and Herbie. "David's
an officer with the Seventh, on Colonel Fiske's staff," he explained, as if Hal
would understand him completely and demonstrate patriotic appreciation.
Hal
returned, "Very good." Herbie was still. What Hal could guess was
that this was about the excitement of the last week, the presidential call-up of
the famous New York National Guard because of an emergency in Mexico, perhaps
because there was going to be a war with Mexico. Finkelstein had said
something about Mexico when he said there would presently be a shortage of
trained mechanics everywhere in the city. Since no one Hal knew was in
the militia, and since Hal believed the militia was for the rich, the restless
or the well-employed, the national preparedness crisis, so-called, had passed
mostly by Hal's attention like a Fifth Avenue parade.
C.
T. Silver was explaining to his son that he'd found Mr. Coolidge and Mr. Hecht
on his doorstep this morning because they wanted to apply for a mechanic's job
that hadn't been advertised yet. ". . . and they found out about it
from Mr. Finkelstein of Spruce Street!"
David
Silver teased, "Maybe we should ask Mr. Finkelstein when we're departing for
the border." And to Hal, David Silver spoke generously, "Hope you get the
job; I'm rooting for you," and he called after Hal with a cheerful, "Good
luck!" before he turned to conferring with his father.
Duquet
ordered, "Come with me," and led the brothers into the interior of the
building, a newly renovated garage with a double bay of doors onto
Fifty-seventh Street. The ground floor had two automobile elevators at
the center that lifted the vehicles to the floor above. "Six thousand
square foot," cried out Duquet over the screeching of the motor and cables as
the elevator engaged and descended. They walked by a workbench where several
thick-armed, clean-shaven men in gray "C. T. Silver Motors" overalls were
setting up their tool racks for the day. "Fireproof," said Duquet,
"All modern conveniences. Not just for our own but also automobiles
traded in or sold. See?"
Hal was especially impressed by the disciplined labor, the extravagant
dimensions, the quality of the equipment and the comfortable working
conditions: well-lit, airy, with just the correct aroma of gasoline, grease and
rubber. There were already six autos lined up tightly in a row to be
directed to the service area: Hal counted a Stevens-Duryea seven-passenger
touring car, a new Hudson, a 1915 Pierce-Arrow, a 1916 Peerless, a 1916 Mercer
toy tonneau, a 1915 Maxwell, and a Garford "Six" seven-passenger touring
with wire wheels, clearly a prized property of a chauffeur and a big
house. A stubby Hupmobile was parked by the workbench with its cowl
off, its engine swung up on tackle and blocks.
When
Duquet turned his back, Hal confided to Herbie, "We're doin' great," and Herbie
nodded and beamed.
"This
is our beauty," Duquet announced. He stopped beside a stock 22-72 Mercer
raceabout. "We put her into races for engines up to the 450 cubic inch
piston displacement range. The twin of this won a challenge in Havana
some weeks back."
Hal
responded, "That's not 300 cubic inches, is it?"
Duquet
blinked with what might have been pleasure. "It's 298.2. You race?"
"We'd
like to. We won a truck race once. FWDs. Long distance.
Fourteenth Street to Peekskill and return. It wasn't about speed.
It was keeping the road."
By
the time they stepped through the service area onto Fifty-seventh Street,
pushing through a line of glamorous young men in fine summer suits and $5
skimmers, waiting fretfully for their machines as if this was a maternity ward
and not a gasoline alley, Hal was too headlong to think about the day other
than as their first break they'd had since Herbie's dad had died two years
before. C. T. Silver Motors was heaven. It was better than any
garage Hal had seen or heard about in New York, and the pay was twenty-five per
cent better by arrangement. Mother was going to whoop with
joy. Twenty-four months' working and saving, maybe thirty-six, and they'd
have what they needed to purchase their own dealership, or a sizeable share --
".
. . said I want to see you alone," Duquet repeated.
Hal
recognized from the gruffness that bad news was coming. They stood in the
breeze, stepping free of a Winton Six that turned in from Fifty-sixth, the
driver in overalls calling to Duquet, "Mornin', Lou."
"Here
now," Duquet started; he was going to smoke. "We need you. We've
got this place for Chalmers, and down Broadway at Fiftieth, a whole new
building by Thanksgiving, and I need all he experienced men I can find."
Hal
heard discomfort; he tried, "That's us."
"You." Lighting his cigarette, he
exhaled. "Just you."
Hal
glanced at his brother. "Herbie Hecht and I are partners."
"How
much you take home?"
Hal
spoke accurately, "Forty-nine dollars a month. We both do, at the
National Biscuit Garage at Thirteenth and Eleventh. Trucks mostly.
Our foreman's Mr. Archie Vernon."
"We'll
pay $80. When can you start?"
Hal
knew this was defeat; he tried a last time, "We can start soon tomorrow."
Duquet
spoke unambiguously, "I can't help your pal there. Nobody can."
Duquet turned his back and strode into his automobile paradise.
Later, as they passed the chugging locomotive equipment in the New York Central and Hudson yards along Tenth Avenue, Herbie was waving at the fresh
Pullman cars
making up for points west as if they were friendly horses, while Hal was
cheering them on, ". . . and if we keep this pace up, we can punch in by eight,
like I told Mr. Vernon," and they cut along from Chelsea Park to reach Eleventh
and downhill to National Biscuit. The last four blocks, Hal said, "Race
ya," and they accelerated with laughs, two young men in high spirits.
Herbie didn't mind about C. T. Silver Motors; it was all the same to Herbie if
they worked just anywhere, even if they committed their dreams to marching the
trolley tracks of New York in search of a pot of gold. Only Hal
felt bashed by the rejection, and as he ran along, he preached to himself a
version of his mother's golden proverb, "Other ways to get ahead. Way
will open, way always does open."
Hal
continued this debate with himself in his waking sleep the next morning, when
he came out of his exhaustion--"Hal
Coolidge! Herbie Hecht!" --and
then he was alert to realize the voice was from the landing outside his
door. "A gent fer ya!" It
was the landlord, Mr. Burnius, a solitary squirrel of a miser, bellowing from
his own door on the ground floor. Mr. Burnius had been adamant the time Hal and
Herbie had roomed here that he was not a messenger or postman for his
tenants. "I come up, cost ya day's rent!"
Dressed
hastily, Hal and Herbie reached Mr. Burnius as he slammed his door, and they
found outside in the cool sunrise a gleaming Overland Six, top down, door open,
David Silver standing at alert.
"Good
morning, forgive me, for waking you, I couldn't think what else to do to reach
you before Monday. Father gave me your address. Forgive me."
He bowed, lifting his $5 skimmer; he was dressed in sporting clothes, a bright
blue and white striped tie and gleaming gold buttons on his blazer. "We
met yesterday morning at my father's office."
"No
trouble," Hal answered, curious. "It's getting on to work time for us."
"Let
me buy you breakfast. Is there somewhere?"
Soon
they were at Mrs. Hoffman's Restaurant, at the clean wooden counter top,
sitting elbow to elbow on tottering stools, served strong coffee, flapjacks
with once-over eggs, and Hal's favorite, ham toast, made to Hal's taste with
three ounces of whipping cream and heavy cayenne. David Silver liked the flapjacks immediately, swallowing in
gulps. "I know that Lou Duquet offered you one job, not two," started
David Silver. "And I know you turned it down, which I admire. What
my old teacher would call an act of a man with bottom."
Hal
put down his cup. "Herbie and I work together."
"Yes.
Here. I'm asking you here to sign on to my regiment, the Seventh, as
privates assigned to headquarters company, same as I am. We need you to
care for the Overlands my father has presented my colonels. The regiment
is short of everything, with many men away and a deal of married men begging to
be excused. But of twelve or thirteen hundred men, not one
mechanic. My father's garage is full of mechanics, and hiring more, but
they won't go with us; they say the same thing, family men. And here you
and Mr. Hecht arrive on the week we need you, and we do need you. I
should say, your country needs you, but that seems out of line with what I'm
thinking. Let's leave patriotism aside and keep to the terms of
employment. What do you say?"
Hal
looked at Herbie, who kept eating his eggs, more eggs. Hal replied
candidly, "I'll have to say, thank you for your kind words and thinking of us,
but we're building our savings, and we have a plan for a National Automobile
Association dealership in White Plains or Yonkers. Another year or two,
and we can have what we need. Three thousand dollars for the both of us."
"It's
the income, then, not the militia, not going off to Mexico in this Villa and
Carranza crisis?" David Silver put down his fork on the flapjacks.
"This is too good."
"I
didn't know much about Mexico," Hal commented, meaning to be modest but at the
same time thorough. "After your father spoke of you going to Mexico, I
asked Mr. Finkelstein about it--last
night on the way home. Now I know the President has ordered you to be
prepared to go to the border. Certainly I heard about the parade last week,
when the Sixty-ninth Regiment went to Peekskill. Now I know it involves
the Mexicans in a civil war. Now I know who President Carranza is, who
used to be Mr. Wilson's friend, and I certainly know who Pancho Villa is and
how he's murdered Americans in New Mexico. I don't read the papers
regularly, but we discuss them at the garage, and Mr. Finkelstein explains to
me the political life when I ask him.
President Wilson is running for re-election, I know to be true, and I know that
his call-up of the militia took place just after the Democratic
Convention finished. Is it a coincidence? I don't know. Mr.
Finkelstein says we can say it's a convenience. The Trib
and the World and the Sun think not, if you read them. I don't know
about the Herald, the American or the Times. Mr. Finkelstein says the German paper, Staats
Zeitung, thinks the United States is going
to invade Mexico."
David
Silver commented, "You know a deal, you and Mr. Finkelstein."
Hal
added, ". . . but no, it's not that, it's not about my opinion of the crisis,
as they call it, the newspapers call it, the 'Preparedness Crisis.' It's
that Herbie and I don't think of us as fellows who have the time, or the funds,
to join up and go away. We have a mother in Ossining, who needs us, and
we have a chance now to make something of ourselves. To be something
better, sir."
"You're
frank as well as honest."
"Not
so that I didn't deceive your father yesterday when I said we were married
men," Hal replied. "You understand what we are. Two mechanics with
plans. It's automobiles that are changing the United States, not going
off to Mexico."
David
Silver laughed at Hal's cautious irony and finished his coffee. "I spoke
to my father about you and Mr. Hecht. Father knows you aren't married
men. Neither am I. We each have plans. Right now, my
plan is to provide mechanics for the two Overlands my father has given my
colonels. Your plan is to save money for your own business. I have
a compromise. What if I tell you that Father agrees, like many other
firms in New York, that Father agrees to pay your wages while you are on
service with the Seventh? Pay the wages you would receive at Silver
Motors. What would that be?"
"Mr.
Duquet offered me $80 a month."
"Done,"
confirmed David Silver. "Plus
fifty cents a day for each of you, the militia's wages for a private.
It'll be sixty cents when you make first-class, and seventy and eighty when you
make corporal, and a dollar as sergeant, when you get your stripes, as I know
you will."
"Fifty
cents a day to start," Hal repeated the figures slowly and definitively, a man
writing a contract in the air. If Mrs. Hoffman had been up yet, he would
have asked her to write it out. "Three dollars and fifty cents a week
each. That's fifteen dollars a month each. Plus eighty dollars from
your Father. That's ninety-five dollars each a month total. Each,
is that correct? To join the Seventh Regiment and go with you to Mexico?"
"Yes,
it is." David Silver loosed his right hand from his jacket pocket.
"And we can shake hands on it?"
"Herbie,
you're listening to this?"
Herbie
dipped into more ham toast and spoke with a mouthful. "Yeah. Good."
Hal
wanted to say, Done, also, but this
wouldn't be responsible until he visited with Mother to win her approval.
"We have to visit with our mother, first."
"And
your family?" David Silver asked Herbie.
Herbie
spoke while chewing, "We're brothers," and David Silver couldn't hope to
understand him.
"Herbie's
my step-brother," said Hal. "My mother married his father. Before his dad passed away. We're family."
"We
thought it was like that." David Silver lowered his head. "I have
to get on to my mother's. We both have mothers." The counter was
now crowded with hungry working men. More food arrived for Hal, also
another serving of ham toast and a ham omelet that Herbie had ordered in his
enthusiasm to dine on someone else's pocketbook. "Can you
walk me back to my auto?" David Silver asked Hal. "I have to get to the
Armory before going upriver and tell them you're coming by . . ." David Silver
paid the bill, $.65, left a quarter and a dime
on the counter, and led the way to his Overland. "You'll let me know your
decision today?" David Silver asked. "We're departing next week.
Perhaps Monday or Tuesday, not later than Thursday. You can go to the
Armory on Sixty-seventh and Park today . . ."
"Tomorrow."
Hal pressed, not about to forgo a day's wages in hand. "We don't want to
miss any more hours, and we have to say goodbye to Mr. Vernon and tell him."
"Then,
tomorrow. And please give my name to the recruiter, First Sergeant Bigelow,
who will have your names. Here's my card to show if anyone asks, but I'll
be waiting in the building. It's liable to be-- pandemonium."
"When
we get back from church," Hal corrected. "From church with Mother.
When we get back in the afternoon." Hal breathed out and accepted the
card. It read: "First Lieutenant David A. Silver, Headquarters Company,
Seventh Regiment, New York National Guard." Hal added, "Depending upon my
mother's opinion."
At
the open door, David Silver finished his thoughts, "I want you to hear
something unfortunate but true from me. There's an investigation just now
into why Jews are barred from enlisting in the New York National Guard, did you
know that? Conducted by General Stotesbury for Governor Whitman,
upon a complaint by the Kehillah Committee for the Protection of the Good Name
of Immigrant Peoples. It won't come to much, but it's
official. The regimental colonels will say it's not anti-Semitism,
that is, religious prejudice; they will says it's because Jews are unpleasant,
or overly sensitive, or squeamish, or needing gloves. I'm a Jew, as you
know, and I want you to know that I while I am not cranky or delicate, I am
nonetheless the only Jew who is an officer in the Seventh Regiment. And
it's not unheard of to hear the remark from some knotheads that I am a
showpiece, or perhaps that my father purchased my commission. I joined
last year after I left law school.
Law's not for me, as plain as that. There are several Jews in the
ranks, two of the non-commissioned officers, Coen and Braun, but I am the only
officer. A quartermaster. It's called the Jewish Cavalry."
Hal puzzled. An El rounded the bend and started to break for the Fulton Street station. Hal had regarded Silver Motors in many ways, luxurious, prestigious,
unapproachable; he had not thought: Jews, or anything close to
Jews. Certainly the Silvers were nothing like the Jews in the streams of
gnarled, bearded slum dwellers and their rheumy kin shoveled into the Ghetto
north of the Brooklyn Bridge. Hal knew Jews like Finkelstein, who looked
like a Jew, the long curved nose, the finger-waving speechifying. David
Silver looked and acted like a clubman stepped out of the Union League, a rich
man's frothy, pin-cushion portly son. Hal raised his voice over the
screeching El, "I guess I didn't think you were a Jew!"
David
Silver asked loudly, "You have doubts about a business offer from a Jew?"
"No.
No. Ninety-five a month, each? It's my lucky morning."
The five El cars banged to a humming stop. Hal was overwhelmed with
wonder at this turn of events; he shouted, "We're delighted! I'm amazed!"
"My
grandfather's from near Vienna," declared David as the dust rained down from
the tracks. "And I tell you this so you have my open motive for asking
you to join up. It will make me look good that I provided, in the nick of
time, the mechanics we needed for Father's gifts. The Overlands will go
with us with the horses, and they're yours to care for. I will look very
good." The El banged to a start and the cars rumbled and clacked heavily
north. "And that's important to me!" David Silver shouted. "I
want to serve my country! I'm loyal to my family, like you! We Jews
are loyal! And I like loyalty like yours!" His hand came out.
"Shake on it?"
"Yes."
Hal gave his hand; and afterward, as he stood by watching his benefactor David
Silver depart Pearl Street, Hal thought, Way opened, just as Mother said. And he laughed and cried, "Opened!"
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The
widow Mrs. Rosalind Coolidge Hecht, at forty-five petite and oval-faced like a
brown hare, dressed in her happiest fine-flowered voile dress with a ribboned
girdle and wearing top her favorite wide-brimmed Leghorn straw hat, rocked with
her notes from the hymnal to show her thankfulness at the surprise of having
her two sons join her at services. In the pew beside them were Mrs.
Hecht's affectionate church friends, with whom she usually sat, the widows Mrs.
Gee and Mrs. Chatfield, who, like Mrs. Hecht, were veteran senior house matrons
from Ossining estates above the Hudson; and Mrs. Hecht was assured of a week of
sweetly competitive conversation in at least three manses about how handsome
and mature Hal looked, how loving and heart-breakingly devoted Herbie was to
his mother. Thankful Mrs. Hecht raised her alto to match Hal's sonorous,
gravelly baritone and Herbie's rich tenor - Herbie sang more discernibly than
he spoke -- for the fourth verse,
"Stand
up! Stand up for Jesus, the strife will not be long;
this
day the noise of battle, the next the victor's song;
to
him who overcometh, a crown of life shall be;
he with the King of Glory shall reign eternally."
The
recessional hymn arrived, followed by the closing prayer, the organ solo, the
heartfelt "Amens" from the parishioners, and then Hal followed his mother and
Herbie slowly in the receiving line to greet the full-bearded, pince-nez-wearing pastor--"What a gift for your Mother to have her boys
surprise her . . ." Spread
out on the lawn beside the chapel, under the usefully fine weather of northern
Westchester, the Briarcliff congregation divided along class lines, the newly
prosperous villagers relocated from the city to one side, the long-time Yankee
servants from the manses on another, and a handful of the widows of estate
owners who did not favor the Anglican services up at the
crossroads. The gregarious, egalitarian pastor roamed among the
knots of the old hands and the newcomers, mostly staying with the fresh
families. Hal and Herbie did not much like tea, so they stood
patiently with their mother in their brown worsted wool suits, with ginger cake
on a plate, to listen to Mrs. Gee's and Mrs. Chatfield's questions while they
all waited to be fetched to the Baillie's estate by Ed Day.
"Your
mother says you have news?" asked Mrs. Gee. "It must be good news?"
"It's
a new employment?" said Mrs. Chatfield.
"I
wouldn't let a son of mine keep a secret," said the daughters-only, tiny Mrs.
Gee; in a cotton voile dress with a Persian design, she was even smaller than
the petite Mrs. Hecht, nearly an elf, with curly fair hair beneath her flapping
straw hat; she had raised her three surviving girl babies to become house
servants like herself, now distributed up and down the Hudson River estates.
Mrs.
Chatfield, a ruddy-cheeked, corpulent woman in a prosperous blue Chinese pongee
silk dress, was originally from Yonkers, not Vermont like her two friends; she
was the most worldly of the trio, and therefore the most confrontational,
burying two husbands in the Bronx churchyards and two children in a White
Plains cemetery before she came to Ossining; one child she had lost to scarlet
fever had been born different, like Herbie; and she cherished Herbie especially
for her memory: she teased him adoringly, "You can whisper to me, darling," and
bent her ear to Herbie's chin, which made Herbie giggle softly and try to hide
behind Hal. Mrs. Chatfield teased them more, "What's that? You say you've
found a garage in White Plains? Or you're sailing to the South
Pole? Speak up. An autobus driver at last, Herbie?"
Herbie
coughed on his bite of cake. "No, no, National Guard."
This
came out indistinct as usual, more like "nash an gourd"; however, these
three mothers, accustomed to Herbie's speech, understood too well and with
instant solemnity.
"Ah,
dear," said Mrs. Gee with a sharp, grave note.
"Hal?"
said Mrs. Hecht.
"It's
a business opportunity we've come upon, Mother."
"When?"
Hal
lowered his eyes. "I was going to speak to you."
"No,
when did you come upon the plan?"
"Yesterday,"
answered Hal.
"And
that's why you came out today?" asked Mrs. Hecht: she laid her left palm on her
left chin in a gesture of extreme worry.
Mrs.
Gee commented, "The National Guard is a business, I'm not sure?"
"I
see Mr. Day has brought himself at last," said the acerbic Mrs. Chatfield as
the Baillie family's Chalmers Laudelet rolled to a stop down the road.
Mrs.
Gee closed in on Mrs. Hecht and took her bare, pink arm. "As long as he's
not signed . . ." was all Hal could hear as he caught up. The automobile
was a year-old, seven-seat Packard limousine, tended by the Baillie estate
chauffeur, the tall, rope-slender, unflappable Ed Day, who routinely drove
these three senior house matrons to their Sunday services. The Roman
Catholic servants had their own horse-drawn coach to fetch them to Chapel up
the road; the German-speaking Lutherans traveled to Tarrytown, as did the few
Dutch Reformed; but these three Yankees had their own limousine, which
delivered them to the Baillie estate for a Sunday meal arranged to celebrate
Hal and Herbie's extravagant surprise visit--now exposed as suspicious, even deceitful.
Hal,
understanding he was on the wrong side of the three most potent women in the
neighborhood, each of them commanding an estate's house staff with the revered,
feared omnipotence of a sea captain, behaved sedately in and around the cozy,
damp servant's quarters while he awaited his fate. To mask his concern,
he made professional observations to Ed Day about the new Goodrich-made tires:
". . . the safety treads are dear, but they give you value. What'd you
pay? Thirty dollars is a good price . . ." and later he stood at the
walkway and conversed with the weathered, fraternal groundskeepers Jock Quarles
and his assistant Pat Tyrone as they cleaned their hands on rough soap before
coming inside for the meal.
"Goddamned
rose bushes," cursed Mr. Quarles. Hal hero-worshipped Jock Quarles,
thought him a living example of Cooper's Natty Bumppo, a compact, sinewy,
nut-brown Yankee forester who could survive on guile and a knife, and he
replied, "Correct." Herbie and the more serene gnome Pat Tyrone
giggled. "Goddamned rose blights--spittlebugs,
rose weevils, slugs and snails and powdery mildew, botrytis blight and the cursed,
satanic aphid," said Jock Quarles.
The
dinner bell sounded and Hal, unready for his mother, ushered Herbie, Jock Quarles,
Pat Tyrone, and Ed Day before him into the servant's quarters. The Baillie
Manse was an older Hudson summer cottage, fifteen rooms, stone-faced,
porch-wrapped, on eighty-three rocky, heavily forested acres, with a shut-up
three-storey guesthouse, two barns, an unused stable, a new three-bay garage, a
two-part spring house, a two-storey gatehouse, all on a substantial, heavily
wooded rounded hillside--that was
actually a ceaseless, steep-sided collection of ridges cut by streams--above the prosperous river town of Ossining.
The elder Baillies were too senior to leave Manhattan and never visited; their
children were too busy to summer here anymore; the grandchildren didn't care
for the backwater of Westchester when the White Mountains of New Hampshire or the
Downeast of Maine were more fashionable for retreat in the hot wet months, if
you couldn't be in Europe because of the ruinous nature of the war; and so,
these last several wet years, the summer tenant of the main rooms was the
senior Mrs. Baillie's younger sister, the widow Mrs. Hibbard Casselberry, and
sometimes Mrs. Casselberry's equally ancient, quarrelsome, widowed
acquaintances from her decades married to a New York State senator who had
improbably drowned in Connecticut. The manse was so unoccupied, so
purposeless, that the servant staff in their cozy two-storey wing connecting to
the garage, were like a marooned family that had been abandoned by the ghosts
of the profligate, pointless, now disregarded Nineteenth Century, a marooned
family that had no means of escape into the industrious Twentieth Century.
Significantly,
the future for young men from servant's families was not in service but rather
in a trade in Manhattan and the growing towns around it, or so Hal had
concluded years before, leaving school at sixteen, with his mother's agreement,
to go off to New York City, after two successful summers working delivery jobs,
to establish himself in the fast-growing skill of automobile mechanics; Herbie
had joined him three years later.
"We'll
say a prayer of thanks, Hal," his mother declared at the table.
Now
Hal had reached another decision about his future, or wanted to reach it.
To his mind, what he was asking his mother's permission for--admittedly with the surprising twist of the military--was a logical, useful step on the path that had
taken him from the Baillie House and, he hoped, would some day bring him back
to Westchester as a successful commercial man, a pride to his mother.
There
were twelve for midday supper, the five men folk; the three matrons; the two
housemaids, Bridey and Patty; and one laundress, Tina, returned from the
Catholic chapel; and the scullery maid Lois, since the cook, Mrs. Hawgood, did
not like to sit at her own cooking as it deprived her of control of the
dishes. They sat four to a side, with Mrs. Hecht, Mrs. Gee and Mrs.
Chatfield at the head, Mr. Quarles and Mr. Tyrone at the bottom of the table,
and Ed Day Herbie and Hal to their mother's left hand. The maidservants,
round, flighty, wordless young women in the grip of Mrs. Hecht's governance,
sat as a team together and ate without comment other than "Thankee kind," or
"Very good, ma'am," though they did like to listen to conversation.
Hal
encouraged Herbie to lead the prayer as they joined hands. Herbie's words
were sincere and well understood by the assembly. The settings began with
potato soup a rich cream of cheese soup, with
chicken broth for Lois who might have had the sniffles, with a tomato and
hickory nut salad alongside a dish of lettuce leaves to delight and impress
Mrs. Gee and Mrs. Chatfield, and quickly moved to the main course of stuffed
ham, made the way Hal and Herbie most liked it, with well-smoked ham cut up and
mixed with cabbage sprouts, parsley, stale bread, black pepper and pushed into
cuts in the huge baked ham. Mrs. Hawgood also served choices for Jock
Quarles's approval; such as she'd used the two hares he'd bagged to make rabbit
en casserole with an unmentioned five tablespoons of sherry. Mrs. Hawgood
stood arms folded at the archway and watched Herbie eat the rice and chicken
croquettes she'd made for him and the maids, and watched Mr. Quarles and Tyrone
battle over the rabbit. The meal was going so raucously and
fraternally, with the youngsters' receiving a favorite beverage of ginger pop,
or orange bouillon, black currant cup, and the women drinking tea, and, for the
men, iced coffee--this was a temperance
household--with serving dishes
flying up and down the table, scoops and "another smidgen" of boiled onions,
scalloped potatoes, baked cabbage and bacon, buttered cauliflower, mashed
turnips, browned, deviled tomatoes and cole slaw--and everyone was so obviously satisfied--that Hal was hoping, as they moved to deserts, that
his mother would delay the conversation about the militia until much
later.
As
the baked apple dumplings, cherry roly poly, marmalade pudding and peach
manioca pudding, and lemon with raisin pie and apple custard pie arrived,
served on trays by Lois to the applause of Ed Day and Mr. Tyrone--who would eat everything sweet till it was gone in
the next few days--Mrs. Hecht
presented the first remark directed exclusively at Hal since the meal had begun
a half hour before.
"Hal,
will you cut Herbie a piece of lemon raisin pie before Mr. Tyrone gets a hold
of it, and while you do that, will you explain to us, how the National Guard is
a 'business opportunity'?"
"Hey?"
Jock Quarles looked around at Hal with a half-smile, half-frown; he waved his
big hands in the direction of the city, "What have you done?"
"You
will not interfere," contributed Mrs. Chatfield.
"He's
told us that he and Herbie have joined the National Guard," said Mrs. Gee.
Hal
knew this was already going badly. Hal considered the marmalade pudding
on his plate. He sipped coffee. "We haven't joined yet. We
have been invited to join, and the invitation has a big pay increase to it."
Pat
Tyrone, who was a pinchpenny himself and approved of it in Hal, remarked, "The
National Guard is going to pay you better than the National Biscuit
Company? That's unlikely."
"Impossible,"
said Mrs. Gee.
"The
National Guard's to fight Mexico," declared Ed Day, who was the close newspaper
reader at the table, though messers Quarles and Tyrone followed the news about
the Irish rising and were not indifferent to the European war, especially if
the reviled English crown was battered about by bad news. "Mexico started
it, and now we're going to finish it . . ."
"Let
Hal explain, and keep the politics out of this room while we're discussing
important family matters," Mrs. Gee insisted, patrolling the table with her
bright, dark eyes; she turned to Mrs. Hecht, "Roz?"
Mrs.
Hecht took the conversation back to Hal. "Have you already signed a
paper? For yourself and Herbie?"
"No,
no, Mother."
"Thank
you, Jesus," muttered Mrs. Gee, grasping her hands together.
".
. . but," Hal continued, "we're invited by an officer to visit the recruiting
clerk tonight."
"Hal,
tell us, what regiment?" asked Mr. Quarles.
Hal
could see that the three men were on his side and the three matrons were
not. He decided to appeal to his supporters. "The Seventh.
The Armory is at Park at Sixty-seventh Street and the recruiting clerk is
Sergeant Bigelow."
"Silk-stocking
regiment," contributed Ed Day. "Astors and Schermerhorns and Rhinelanders
and such . . ."
"Our
Hal and Herbie in the Seventh," Mr. Quarles spoke to Mr. Tyrone.
"Sharp
to get them," said Pat Tyrone.
"They had to march the regiment down Fifth Avenue Friday for recruits," Hal
explained, "because, I'm told, they are in short supply."
Mrs.
Hecht was coolly patient. "You want to volunteer yourself to go with the
Seventh Regiment to fight the Mexicans? And you just discovered this
yesterday? You just discovered that you're not an automobile mechanic,
which you're trained to be, but rather a soldier-- something you've never talked
about, never once in twenty-one years of talking, never a soldier, never-- And
you want to go off with your brother with my permission?"
Fresh
coffee and a bowl of peach bombe arrived, along with three flavors of new ice
cream. The strawberry went to Herbie and Pat Tyrone. With quick
orders, Mrs. Hecht supervised the clearing of the table by the maids.
In
the necessary pause--Hal noted that the
sky outside the porch window was dimmer, just like his case--Ed Day commented again from the range of his reading
while he'd waited for the church service to finish, that General Wood wanted
the Seventh and Seventy-first to go straight on to the border, that they were
only waiting for special trains, that he'd stood at the Ossining station with
the crowd last week to wave the special through as the Fourteenth and the
Sixty-ninth passed en route to Peekskill, and they were certain to
go to the border as soon as they found the cars.
Mrs.
Gee spoke to Mrs. Hecht, "There's suddenly a bloodthirsty chorus at the table,
and I don't know who invited it."
Jock
Quarles defended his friend Ed Day, "The news is why Hal's been invited
to join."
Mrs.
Chatfield did not relent: "And I don't know why we need your news." Mrs.
Gee hissed with a sincere voice, something of a sob, "These are her sons
trying to run off to war."
"No,
no, it's not that way," said Hal. "We aren't running off. No,
Mother. We're offered a deal of money to join up as mechanics."
"How
much money as mechanics?" asked Pat Tyrone quickly as he swallowed his lemon
with raisin pie.
Hal
used his strongest argument, "Eighty dollars a month each, from Silver Motors,
and fifteen more from the Army. Ninety-five in total. Each."
"Joseph
and Mary, now," said Pat Tyrone. "Who's paying you eighty?"
"Silver
Motors, of Broadway. Both of us." Hal touched his plate, then
Herbie's. Here was a chance to carry the case. "I wouldn't be
willing if it wasn't such a sum. Many, many of the big firms are paying
their boys who go off, and Mr. Silver's son told us that he would too.
Pay us both.
"The
American Can is paying its boys, I heard it from Mr. Begley in Tarrytown,"
contributed Ed Day. "And the United States Rubber Company, with
re-employment guaranteed, and the Edison Electric Illuminating Company, and . .
." he continued to recite until Mrs. Gee cut him off, "Hush."
Hal
continued to his mother and her friends with his sharpest, most convincing,
least defensive case: "We can save very quickly, perhaps four or five hundred
dollars by Christmas. And these are jobs that we applied for but didn't
get the first time. This is a second chance."
Mrs.
Hecht said, "How do you know it won't be years, like in France."
"I'm
just estimating, I don't know how long," said Hal.
"I'm
certain you're mother's told you what bad luck it is to count what isn't
yours," said Mrs. Chatfield.
"What
can we say to you, Hal?" Hal's mother asked glumly.
"Ah,
Clara," said Mrs. Gee in low, rasping despair.
Mrs.
Chatfield drank her tea and remarked in a deceptively clever way, "You have to
collect the money to save it and use it, don't you Hal? And Herbie,
too. You have to be well to collect it. And you don't want to tell
us that you are going to take yourself and Herbie to fight Mexico because you
can save money quickly by Christmas?"
"What's
not right about defending our country from the Mexicans?" asked Mr. Day.
"Leave
it be," warned Jock Quarles.
"We're
not asked to fight the Mexicans," Hal explained. "We're asked to be
mechanics on the Overland Sixes that Mr. Silver gave to the regiment's
commanding officers."
"Ninety-five a month, that is a prize," said Pat Tyrone, "This Mr.
Silver's trustworthy?"
"Yes.
Shook hands on it." Hal was momentarily encouraged. "Though he understood
I was going to ask Mother. He said he had a mother to speak to
also. Apparently we could be going on the cars soon."
"The
business is sound?" asked Jock Quarles.
"Grand
showroom on Automobile Row, and branches in the Bronx and Brooklyn and Long
Island," Hal answered, "and opening a new, six-storey, fireproof garage."
Hal
chose to leave out the part about David Silver's being worried about being a
Jew in the National Guard.
"Please, stop this," asked Mrs. Hecht. "Mr. Quarles, Mr. Tyrone, Mr. Day,
I appeal to you. My sons are aiming to go off to this Mexican war, if
that's what it is, and I don't want you discussing it like a profit.
These are my sons."
"Yes,
ma'am" said Ed Day. "Beg pardon," said Jock Quarles. "Myself as
well," said Pat Tyrone. "And we were discussing it as a sound financial
prospect."
"Money
for war is neither sound nor financial," Mrs. Chatfield countered.
The
table fell to the wordless sound of clinking, banging flatware. The five
men folk sat with their hot coffee cups needing refilling, except each of them
was reluctant to move, assuming this might be a moment to escape to smoke--Quarles and Tyrone smoked pipes in their cabin
behind the springhouse, Ed Day liked cigarettes in the garage or in Tarrytown
at the hotel bar--if Mrs. Hecht
declared the meal at an end.
"I'm
not going to give you permission," Mrs. Hecht declared to Hal. "I'm
not. I'm going to let you do what's right for you."
"Good,"
said Mrs. Gee, patting Mrs. Hecht's forearm. "Well put."
"You're
the wise one," Mrs. Chatfield offered to Mrs. Hecht.
'Well
then?" Mrs. Hecht asked Hal.
The
three matrons fixed their hierarchical, irreproachable, judgmental and, to
Hal's measure, unremittingly disappointed eyes at him. Hal, regarding
this as the worst possible sentence, comprehending that the long thrashing he
was taking here was a pittance of what he would get for the rest of his days if
this went badly, rejoined, "I can see it's the right thing to do, for now, for
what I know about it now. If it's the way it's been put to me, and I find
that the Seventh Regiment is ready to accept me on these terms, the way Mr.
Silver said, then, this is what I'm going to do. For the money, quick as
I can get it."
"Very
well," continued Mrs. Hecht, to the grave head movements of her peers, "You are
a fully grown man, and you are capable of deciding for yourself--I won't say what you're deciding since it is not my
mind here to say what Mexico is about, or why--and that you can live with what comes of it, but--and you know what I'm going to speak of--but this doesn't give you the right to decide for
Herbie, to speak for Herbie."
Hal
sighed and lowered his head. "No."
"It's right for Herbie to say what he wants with your 'business opportunity'."
Jock
Quarles and Pat Tyrone together started muttering, "Herbie, Herbie, your mother
. . ."
"Let
him speak for himself," Mrs. Hecht requested.
"We're
not thinking any other," said Mr. Quarles.
"We
should believe you won't interfere!" Mrs. Chatfield hissed.
Mrs.
Gee interjected, "You must respect the young man."
"We
do," pled Pat Tyrone.
"Let
him speak," Mrs. Gee demanded.
Mrs.
Chatfield faced down Quarles, Day and Tyrone.
"Speak
up, Herbie," said Mrs. Hecht. "You know what we are about. Hal
wants to take himself and you to Mexico, for months and months, he says, we
can't know. For money, he says. With people neither of you know or
have reason to trust. I won't say more. Herbie, has Hal asked
you? You are nineteen years old this August, darling, and you can say
what you want. What do you want to do?"
Herbie,
still chewing the remains of lemon with raisin pie mixed with strawberry ice
cream reduced to a soupy, lumpy pink goo, sensibly did not respond. In these
instances, Herbie knew to wait and wait for Hal to signal him it was time to
speak.
Hal
nodded without looking up.
Herbie
spoke with one rolling sound what each of them understood as if it was written
down, "WangwiHowwl . . ." or, "I
want to go with Hal.

My note is to say that this is the first chapter of a novel, "Mentioned In Dispatches," concerning two young brothers from New York who seek their fortune in World War I era America -- the beginning of a series of stories on the brothers and and their close comrades. Your thoughts are welcome. For example, is the history of the "Preparedness Crisis" that led to the Wilson administration sending one hundred thousand National Guardsmen to the Mexican border familiar to you? It was all a prelude to the United States going to war, though no one at the time had any notion of joining the Great War in Europe. J
Just a brief comment and also drawing from the "Dead Trees Walking" discussion: I found that I had a difficult time getting through this without going blind. I finally went to our local cyber cafe and had it printed out. Now, the reading was much easier - enjoyable even! Whereas before, I tended to get impatient with the detail, wanting desperately to get to the crux of the action (because my eyes hurt), I was now able to relax and luxuriate in John's amiably crowded canvas. Do give us more, John (when you're ready), but don't hold the paper.